I thought Brett's commercial was a perfect example of what the rubric said. He had a powerpoint which was timed perfectly, and he caught your attention from the beginning. He had interesting facts, and look like he did his research. Brett was confident and new what he ws going to say. He deserves at least a good effort grade. I am definetly voting for Brett's Hawaii commercial.
I liked Brett's the most because it seemed like he worked very hard on it. He was prepared, focused, and grabbed the attention of the audience. He definitely made me want to visit Hawaii!!!
Mateo has my vote because he used great props, important information to say, he was very entertaining, and he was like an actual hiker. After listening to him, I want to hike there too.
I'd have to say that Brett's was the best. How he caught your attention in the beginning by saying "ALOHA!" was great. The photos were also cool because they were his own. Most people just got pictures off of the internet, but he used his personal own. Even though I've already been to Hawaii, it makes me want to go again! Nice job Brett! And I liked the shirt!
I have to say, nice job Caelan! I like how you chose a place where you had a kind of multiple choice of what you could do when you were there, and the beach and an amusement park are two awesome attractions that people love to go to. And I like how the parents can go somewhere they like, and the kids won't be bored! You were very detailed with your explanation. Great job!
Brett got my vote because he had so much energy and he looked like he was really into Hawaii and that made me want to go there over all the other states (even my own)!!!!!!
My favorite commercial was Brett's. I liked how he put personal pictures, and he made Hawaii sound really fun and interesting. He worked very hard on the commercial, so he deserves to win.
I loved Brett's but I think Mateo's was most descriptive. I think Mateo's was most dscriptive because he reached out to the most types of people. Exercise,nature,and history. Next time I am in the area of Minnesota, I will be sure to go there. Way to go Mateo and everybody else!
Brett's was amazing! I loved how the pictures came out at the perfect time! And I love how you were very calm and confident when he did his! I loved the legends and myths! Nice going Brett!
I liked Lily's commercial because she was prepared and had a big smile on her face. Every one should have smlie on their face when they are doing something like that. You go Lily!
I liked Brett's Hawaii commercial. I liked how each photo in his slide represented a different part of Hawaii's history. Nice job Louie!!! :)
ReplyDeleteI thought Brett's commercial was a perfect example of what the rubric said. He had a powerpoint which was timed perfectly, and he caught your attention from the beginning. He had interesting facts, and look like he did his research. Brett was confident and new what he ws going to say. He deserves at least a good effort grade. I am definetly voting for Brett's Hawaii commercial.
ReplyDeleteI liked Brett's the most because it seemed like he worked very hard on it. He was prepared, focused, and grabbed the attention of the audience. He definitely made me want to visit Hawaii!!!
ReplyDeleteMateo has my vote because he used great props, important information to say, he was very entertaining, and he was like an actual hiker. After listening to him, I want to hike there too.
ReplyDeleteI like Brett's because he was calm, had my attention, had great information, andmade me want to go to Hawaii.
ReplyDeleteI'd have to say that Brett's was the best. How he caught your attention in the beginning by saying "ALOHA!" was great. The photos were also cool because they were his own. Most people just got pictures off of the internet, but he used his personal own. Even though I've already been to Hawaii, it makes me want to go again! Nice job Brett! And I liked the shirt!
ReplyDeleteI think Rachel really made me want to come to Illinois! She was very prepared and did a great job!
ReplyDeleteI have to say, nice job Caelan! I like how you chose a place where you had a kind of multiple choice of what you could do when you were there, and the beach and an amusement park are two awesome attractions that people love to go to. And I like how the parents can go somewhere they like, and the kids won't be bored! You were very detailed with your explanation. Great job!
ReplyDeleteBrett got my vote because he had so much energy and he looked like he was really into Hawaii and that made me want to go there over all the other states (even my own)!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteBrett's was the very best. He was very descriptive and good. I the places he picked and the legends. It was a good ad in. Good job Brett
ReplyDeleteMy favorite commercial was Brett's. I liked how he put personal pictures, and he made Hawaii sound really fun and interesting. He worked very hard on the commercial, so he deserves to win.
ReplyDeleteI loved Brett's but I think Mateo's was most descriptive. I think Mateo's was most dscriptive because he reached out to the most types of people. Exercise,nature,and history. Next time I am in the area of Minnesota, I will be sure to go there. Way to go Mateo and everybody else!
ReplyDeleteBrett's was amazing! I loved how the pictures came out at the perfect time!
ReplyDeleteAnd I love how you were very calm and confident when he did his!
I loved the legends and myths! Nice going Brett!
I chose Aidan's because I am looking for an awesome water park. :)
ReplyDeleteI liked Brett's because he had great pictures and grabbed my attention from the start.
ReplyDeleteI liked Lily's commercial because she was prepared and had a big smile on her face. Every one should have smlie on their face when they are doing something like that. You go Lily!
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